
That's what I might write if given the chance to correspond with the legend herself. Did I take this exercise too far? Maybe. But it's a big occasion — Jane Austen turns 250 this year!
Luckily, we can imagine a bit of what Jane might reply to my letter (aside from "Who are you?") because Jane Austen was a loyal correspondent.
In addition to her novels, she left behind countless personal letters full of insight into her life and writing process.
Of course, these are personal letters, meaning Jane never set out to teach others how to write. Except maybe her niece, Anna, who asked the literary genius to read her manuscript. Can you imagine asking THE Jane Austen to read your work? I'd rather be forced to dance all night with Mr. Collins.
Can you imagine asking THE Jane Austen to read your work? I'd rather be forced to dance all night with Mr. Collins.
Jane once wrote to Anna:
"We have been very much amused by your 3 books, but I have a good many criticisms to make more than you will like."
Yikes.
We, as her loyal readers, are lucky that somebody else had the guts to ask for her critique and that the replies have been preserved through the centuries.
Here are 7 pieces of writing advice we can take away from the letters of a master storyteller:

1. Make your characters real.
Judging purely on the evidence of her characters, which have been beloved throughout centuries, I think it's clear that Jane placed great emphasis on character development.
In one letter she says of Elizabeth Bennet:
"I must say that I think her as delightful a creature as ever appeared in print, and how I shall be able to tolerate those who do not like her at least, I do not know."
She wrote characters with genuine flaws and motivations rather than the stock literary types that were quite common among her contemporaries.
She also unabashedly thought of her characters as real people. She wrote to her sister Cassandra once that she'd found "a small portrait of Mrs. Bingley" in a museum. And then she lamented not being able to find one of Mrs. Darcy! She went so far as to say:
"I can only imagine that Mr. D prizes any picture of her too much to like it should be exposed to the public eye. I can imagine he wd. have that sort of feeling — that mixture of love, pride and delicacy."
She was also known to give further details of her characters that did not make it into her books. A little like deleted scenes! For example, Kitty Bennet married a clergyman, did you know? That definitely fits.

2. Unapologetically love your work.
One of the first things that stood out to me when I read Jane Austen's letters is how entirely, hopelessly in love she was with her own stories and the characters in them.
This was a big revelation for me, an anxious and self-deprecating writer. The way Jane talked about her stories was so positive and complimentary!
In a letter to Cassandra in January 1813, after receiving feedback on Pride and Prejudice, Jane writes:
"I want to tell you that I have got my own darling Child from London... "
Her "own darling child"! She wrote to her niece once:
"As I wish very much to see your Jemima, I am sure you will like to see my Emma."
Jemima is an actual human baby, and Emma is a book. What confidence!
In a December 1815 letter to her nephew, Jane talks about creating a heroine "whom no one but myself will much like." (That was Emma, of course.)
When people ask me about my books, I stutter something and change the subject. But Jane? Jane wrote of Sense and Sensibility:
"I am never too busy to think of S. and S. I can no more forget it than a mother can forget her sucking child; and I am much obliged to you for your enquiries."
Her language began to make me wonder, could I alter my own enjoyment and perception of my work, and my career, simply by changing the way I talk about it?
Consider this my official declaration that I promise to never again call my WIP "a hot pile of steaming garbage" or "an ongoing dumpster fire." I might think it, but I won't say it.
3. Be concise.
In another letter to Anna in September 1814, Jane cautioned against excessive description:
"You describe a sweet place, but your descriptions are often more minute than will be liked. You give too many particulars of right hand & left."
This is my biggest writerly faux pas, as well. I tend to describe every little detail when the best writing actually leaves room for the reader's imagination to fill in the gaps.
This comment really does reflect Jane's spare prose. She provided enough detail to establish a character, a setting, or atmosphere — a vibe, if you will — without overwhelming the narrative pacing.
Again, though, can you imagine sending your manuscript to Jane Austen to critique? Young Anna had guts.

4. Trust your writerly intuition.
Jane actually found a readership within her lifetime (that can't be said for every classic author), and this occasionally comes up in her letters. Her first book (Sense and Sensibility) was published with the byline "By a Lady," which was common for that time period, and the follow-up, Pride and Prejudice, was "By the Author of Sense and Sensibility."
But some did uncover her identity, including the Prince Regent. Yes, the prince read — and loved — Jane Austen's books, and that did not phase Jane in the least.
In fact, the prince's librarian wrote Jane a letter with suggestions for her next book and she responded completely disinterested ... and a touch mocking.
"I am quite honoured by your thinking me capable of drawing such a clergyman as you gave the sketch of in your note of Nov. 16. But I assure you I am not..."
She even goes on to say:
"I think I must boast myself to be, with all possible vanity, the most unlearned and uninformed female who ever dared to be an authoress."
May we all have the gall to respond thusly to every person who says, "Hey, you should write about..."
Jane took this whole jest so far as to write a short satirical work called "Plan of a Novel, according to Hints from Various Quarters" to further mock the suggestions from the royal sphere.
Instead, Jane stuck to the stories she wanted to tell. As she tells Anna in one letter:
"You are now collecting your People delightfully, getting them exactly into such a spot as is the delight of my life;—3 or 4 Families in a Country Village is the very thing to work on & I hope you will write a great deal more, & make full use of them while they are so very favourably arranged."
And it is because such a story was the delight of Jane's life that she was able to do it justice, and we are able to enjoy them to this day.

5. Be your own best advocate.
Did you know that Jane Austen was self-published?
She paid for the cost of the publication of Sense and Sensibility in 1811. All 750 copies sold, which enabled her to sell the rights to her next book, Pride & Prejudice.
While her brother did some of the publishing negotiating for her, she was known to jump in herself. In 1809, when a publisher bought and then failed to publish one of her manuscripts, she wrote directly to them. She even used a fake name, "Mrs. Ashton Dennis," to hide her identity and to be able to sign it M.A.D.
Check out the scathing last line:
"Should no notice be taken of this address, I shall feel myself at liberty to secure the publication of my work by applying elsewhere."
(Their spiteful reply refused her wishes, but she did eventually get the rights back.)
Later in life, you can see that same tenacity in her letters where she discusses her publisher.
Publishing is an industry where writers often feel they have to "play nice" in order to have a successful career. But I know firsthand that it's as important today as it was in the nineteenth century to advocate for yourself and your work.
6. Revision is a necessary evil.
Jane was a meticulous reviser. In her correspondence with her publisher, she mentions making "many corrections" to her manuscripts before submission.
To her sister Cassandra, she wrote about the satisfaction of improving her work through careful editing:
"I have lopt and cropt so successfully, however, that I imagine it must be rather shorter than 'Sense & Sensibility' altogether."
Can you imagine referencing an icon of British literature like that? (Here, she's talking about the manuscript that would become Pride and Prejudice, which would be her sophomore published novel.)
She also told Anna:
"I hope when you have written a great deal more you will be equal to scratching out some of the past."
This meticulous revision no doubt led to her precise, economical style of prose. And her stories are all the better for it!

7. Write no matter what.
Despite a very hefty travel schedule, domestic duties, and constant correspondence with her loved ones, Jane maintained a disciplined writing practice. In her letters, she often mentions writing amid a whirlwind household activity.
Her niece Marianne recalled her aunt "quietly working beside the fire" (meaning sewing) and then suddenly laughing and running to write something down, before going back to sewing. How familiar that is — just substituting my Notes app for pen and ink!
I was tickled by one complaint in a letter to Cassandra in which Jane discusses a leaky closet at the house. Later in the letter she says of writing:
"Could my ideas flow as fast as the rain in the store closet it would be charming."
What characteristic Jane wit!
And of course there's that famous line from a letter of Jane's that I repeat to myself more often than I'd care to admit:
"I am not at all in a humour for writing; I must write on till I am."
It's that spirit that helped her complete six gorgeous novels before her untimely death at the age of 41.
By following Jane's example, those of us writing two centuries later can still build a beautiful and prolific writing life.
And an honorary #8: Money is nice.
"People are more ready to borrow and praise, than to buy — which I cannot wonder at; but tho' I like praise as well as anybody, I like what Edward calls Pewter too."
Amen, Jane!
There are many different collections of Jane Austen's personal letters, thanks to her beloved nieces and nephews who gathered them after her death. I've read several, but the edition I own and return to again and again (and used for this piece) is The Illustrated Letters of Jane Austen, selected and introduced by Penelope Hughes-Hellett. Happy reading!
























