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Lo que sólo tú puedes aportar a tu escritura

julio 06, 2017 | 4 lectura mínima


La publicación invitada de hoy es de James Scott Bell. Bell es un autor de thrillers superventas y profesor de escritura. Su obra fundamental, "Plot & Structure", ha sido el libro de manualidades número 1 de Writer's Digest Books durante más de una década.


En un taller reciente que estaba impartiendo, comencé mostrando un clip de la divertida película de Albert Brooks, La musa.

Es la historia de un guionista de mediana edad que enfrenta una crisis profesional (algo que, en Hollywood, es casi redundante). Al principio, Brooks almuerza con un jefe del estudio, unos quince años menor que él. Brooks ha presentado un guion de acción y quiere comentarios.

El jefe dice: «Déjame decirlo de forma que no resulte ofensivo, porque suelo ser demasiado directo. Todos mis amigos me lo dicen. El guion no sirve».

Brook dice: "¿Esa es la forma que no es insultante? ¿Cuál sería la forma insultante?"

Cuando Brooks pregunta qué hay de malo en el guión, el jefe responde: "Lo que hay de malo en el guión... eres tú".

Brooks presiona para que dé más detalles. El jefe finalmente dice: «Has perdido la ventaja».

Brooks lo mira con esa expresión de angustia existencial de Albert Brooks que prácticamente le ha quedado grabada. El jefe añade que el estudio necesita que Brooks desocupe su oficina para que Brian De Palma pueda quedársela. "¡No puedes darle mi oficina a Brian De Palma!", dice Brooks.

"En realidad no es tu oficina", responde el jefe. "Aquí solo estamos usando el espacio. Estoy donde antes estaba Lucille Ball".

“Qué lástima que no estés donde ella está ahora.”

En resumen, el almuerzo no sale bien.

Después del video, le dije a la clase que parte de la razón por la que estaban en Story Masters era para evitar una conversación así. ¿Cómo? Encontrando y manteniendo su ventaja.

Que todo escritor tiene, por cierto. El reto es extraerlo y plasmarlo en la página.

¿Qué es la ventaja ? Eres tú. Es lo que te distingue de cualquier otro escritor. Eres un ser humano único, un conjunto de experiencias, pasiones y alegrías singulares... sin mencionar tu ADN. La clave para alcanzar esta ventaja reside en combinar tu singularidad con la maestría de tu oficio y una estrategia integral para tu novela.

Sí, eso es todo.

Luego les mostré a los estudiantes una cita de Marian Lizzi, exeditora de adquisiciones de Penguin. Ella escribía sobre los motivos por los que una editorial rechaza un manuscrito. Uno de ellos es que el libro no es lo suficientemente extraordinario, sorprendente o irresistible:

Este es el más difícil de articular, y sin embargo, en muchos sentidos, es el obstáculo más importante a superar. ¿La propuesta entusiasma a la gente? ¿Estarán los representantes de ventas y los compradores ansiosos por leerla y luego por promocionarla ellos mismos? Como mi primer jefe nos advertía a los asistentes editoriales novatos hace dos décadas, el tipo de propuesta más difícil de detectar, y el más esencial que debemos evitar, es la que es "hábil, competente, culta y, en última instancia, olvidable".

Estas palabras son más importantes que nunca. Todos conocemos el "tsunami de contenido" que compite por la atención y la fidelización de clientes, aunque gran parte de él (¿cómo decirlo de forma que no resulte ofensivo?) es inservible.

Sin embargo, mucho es bueno. Durante casi un cuarto de siglo enseñando el oficio, he visto un aumento significativo en el nivel de la ficción competente. Con toda la enseñanza, los grupos de crítica, los paneles de editores y agentes, y los libros y blogs sobre el oficio que existen, cualquiera con un mínimo de talento —y mucha determinación— puede aprender a escribir ficción competente.

Lo que significa que tenemos que ser más que buenos para destacarnos del atolladero. La ventaja es crucial para lograrlo.

Un viejo predicador les dijo una vez a sus alumnos de ministerio que un sermón no sirve de nada si no entristece, enoja o alegra a la congregación. Hay mucha verdad en eso. Así que prueben este ejercicio:

Escribe tres cosas que te entristecen, tres que te enojan y tres que te alegran. (Nota: para variar, ¡omite cualquier tema político!)

A continuación, toma cada uno de estos nueve elementos y escribe una página sobre por qué te sientes así. Profundiza. Usa tus experiencias de vida, cómo te criaron, lo que has observado y escenas específicas de tu pasado. No tienes que mostrarle estas páginas a nadie, así que despotrica, desvaria y llora todo lo que quieras. Las lágrimas ardientes forjan bordes afilados.

Ahora tienes nueve páginas de respuesta emocional, únicas para ti.

Al desarrollar a tus personajes principales, dales un contexto de tristeza, enojo y alegría. No es necesario que coincidan con los tuyos, pero sin duda podrían hacerlo.

Ahora crea una historia de fondo para justificar cada sentimiento y continúa haciéndolo hasta que tú también lo sientas.

Tu filo emergerá. Síguelo, imprégnalo en la fuerza de tus personajes y la tensión de tus escenas. Si lo haces, no habrá necesidad de un almuerzo incómodo.

En lugar de eso, puedes terminar tu libro.


James Scott Bell James Scott Bell es un autor de thrillers de gran éxito y profesor de escritura. Su obra fundamental, "Plot & Structure", ha sido el libro de técnicas número 1 de Writer's Digest Books durante más de una década. Jim, un conferenciante muy solicitado en congresos de escritores, imparte su popular curso "Cómo escribir una novela irresistible" ya disponible en línea . Puede visitar su sitio web: www.jamesscottbell.com .


septiembre 02, 2026 6 lectura mínima

Kentucky farmer and poet Wendell Berry entranced readers across the globe with his poems extolling the power of knowing the natural world. 

For writers who want to do the same, there’s deep knowledge to be gleaned from Berry.

agosto 26, 2026 5 lectura mínima

Freewriter Mike Somerby left a lucrative marketing career in e-commerce to start a print-only literary magazine by and for Montanans. Yes, you read that right.

We sat down with Mike to find out how ... and why.

Mike Somerby identifies as a writer — with some reservation.

"I think all who write are 'writers,'" he says, "even if the writing itself amounts to a simple letter to a friend or a personal journal entry."

We couldn't agree more. And we're thrilled that this particular writer writes his essays on Freewrite. Maybe that's why we felt comfortable asking him:

What inspires a professional brand marketer to leave his 9-5 and jump feet-first into the literary world of Bozeman, Montana?

Luckily, he was happy to tell us.

AC: Before we get into the lit mag, it actually isn't your first foray into the literary community, right?

MS: For about ten years — the lion's share of my professional chapter — I worked, in some capacity, as a brand marketer. Last spring, while enduring a particularly grueling stint as CMO for a Montanan e-commerce brand (yes, those exist), I found myself revisited by the remarks of an old journalism school professor: from his perspective, journalism students who apply their storytelling talents toward PR and marketing have crossed over to "the dark side."

While I find this a touch heavy-handed, I get the point, and I believe his notion resurfaced to meet the moment: we live in a world sorely hurting for analog (human) creativity and high-quality longform.

So I quit, traveled west with my dog in a 1986 U-Haul I'd converted into a camper, and plotted.

Step one: I founded Pulphead, a lounge (named after John Jeremiah Sullivan’s seminal 2011 essay collection) where Bozeman writers commune and grind out their prose until 2 a.m. Entry is a flat $5, which comes with unlimited drip coffee and tea.

Step two: leverage the Pulphead regulars and its online following to secure contributors for my new literary magazine, ANEMONE. Thus far, everything is going to plan.

We live in a world sorely hurting for analog (human) creativity and high-quality longform.

AC: Why do you think it's so important to create and preserve these spaces for authentic writing?

MS: Writing is a solitary act. Nonetheless, younger generations, in particular, struggle to forge IRL community in the way older generations might understand as an ordinary facet of being human.

By building a space that is as homey as it is supportive of their literary interests, we’re not only helping these individuals find their birds of a feather, but also providing them with a dojo that mandates setting aside blocks of time away from phones, home lives, and the other distractions. Win-win?

Incidentally, Livingston boasts the highest per-capita concentration of professional writers anywhere in the country. Couple this with another statistic — that Montana has more bookstores per capita than any other state — and it becomes clear southwest Montana is as fertile a place as any to invest in literature and its related industries.


AC: That's so interesting. What have you learned from being in community with creatives in Bozeman?

MS: In terms of writing, I've learned plenty. What has excited me most, however, is what I’ve learned from a small group of Indigenous women who come to the shop to write poetry and make beaded clothing in the traditions of their respective tribes (most notably, Crow, Cheyenne, Shoshone).

This is a group I’d otherwise have limited opportunity to engage with outside of Pulphead, and learning about their traditions, beliefs, hopes — even a little vocabulary — through firsthand conversation has proved incredibly edifying.

AC: And you mentioned you've seen Freewrites pop up in Pulphead. You use one, right?

MS: Yes. About seven years ago, not long after moving to Montana from New York, I purchased an Olivetti Lettera 32 typewriter from eBay. It appeared that a romanticizing of my newfound remoteness had rekindled my interest in writing.

I loved the mechanical feel and distraction-free interface, but the inability to edit line by line proved a notable annoyance for a mind habituated to modern computers. A few years down the road, some digging for alternatives led me to a blog post about smart/electronic typewriters. Voilà.

I purchased a Freewrite Gen3 Smart Typewriter, and I've been hooked ever since.

AC: That's awesome. So tell us about ANEMONE. What is it?

MS: ANEMONE is a print-only magazine (printed in a traditional broadsheet newspaper format). As for for theme, broadly, the world as told by Montanans. Short fiction, creative nonfiction, poetry, reportage, photography, and visiual illustrations comprise the submission categories.

AC: Print-only!

MS: Print is only dying because we let it.

AC: Is there a story about the name?

MS: Most people know the word anemone to describe a family of flowers — a 200-plus-species family of buttercups, comprising varieties both wild and domesticated. Dubbed “windflowers,” their delicate petals are said to blow open in the breeze; the ancient Greek word anemos means “wind.” I was drawn to the metaphorical value of beauty and how it can be revealed to us through an invisible force.

To add another layer, when I was a boy my father and I would spend weekends at the beaches north of San Francisco, where I was born and raised until I was seven. We would study the massive turqoise, kelly green, and purple sea anemones clinging to rocks left exposed by the receding Pacific tides (as to why, I can't say, outside of them looking funny, almost alien). A good memory.

Finally, “Anemone” is the name of an exquisite song by The Brian Jonestown Massacre, an irreverent and controversial rock band led by Anton Newcombe, an obsessive creative who rejects the surrender of culture and art to commercial interests. The track has a hold on me. It's like a portal to another era.

AC: Why do you think this sort of analog creativity is important?

MS:  I'm told the unending deluge of digital interface is leaving humans less and less capable of “deep work.” Will we ever know the difference?

Will we recognize what a society incapable of deep work looks like compared with those that came before it? Or will the transition manifest as a gradual degradation of quality, much as Coca-Cola was slowly, but surely, divorced from real sugar, such that to taste what Coke used to be like, one must order a Mexican Coke, still made with real cane sugar?

For me, analog perspective (and any creativity wrung from it) is rooted in continuity, tangibility, lived experience, slowness, spatial relation, nuance, emphasis on process, and grace for imperfection — antithetical to one of replicability, speed, binary outcomes, predictability, and optimization.

I prefer the former, and I suspect those who prefer the latter don't read or write much — life is a beautiful, taxing mess, and good writers find merit in this duality.

For me, analog perspective (and any creativity wrung from it) is rooted in continuity, tangibility, lived experience, slowness, spatial relation, nuance, emphasis on process, and grace for imperfection — antithetical to one of replicability, speed, binary outcomes, predictability, and optimization.

AC: Who is invited to submit to ANEMONE?

MS: We do limit submissions to Montanans, past and present, though we will feature writers from other states should the content of their writing bear an obvious relation to Montana — a requirement not imposed on Montanan writers.

All information regarding submissions can be found at www.anemonereview.com, along with all other facets of the magazine.

agosto 26, 2026 1 lectura mínima

Love the Freewrite 500? Here are 3 more writing contests for competitive short fiction writers.

1) Writers' Hour Magazine Prompts

The London Writer's Salon (a global writing group — no London residence necessary!) regularly host a writing contest via their Writers' Hour Magazine. Want to know a secret? Their September theme is all about freewriting.

Join them for a free workshop, Introduction to Freewriting, on Thursday, September 3, and get all the details about the contest.

The winner of the contest will win something Freewrite-shaped. 👀

2) NYC Midnight Challenges

This organization (again, no affiliation with NYC necessary) regularly hosts short story contests. Their next challenge is all about writing a rhyming story.

Learn more and register here.

Note: NYC Midnight writing contests generally have a fee to enter.

3) Henshaw Press Short Story Competition

This short story competition is open to anyone over age 16. And the best part? There is a cash prize, and profits go to charity.

Learn more here.