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El secreto del diálogo [Pista: Róbalo]

julio 25, 2017 | 6 lectura mínima

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La publicación invitada de hoy es del autor Jeff Somers . Ha publicado nueve novelas, incluyendo la serie Avery Cates de novelas de ciencia ficción negra de Orbit Books, la novela negra y desternillante Chum de Tyrus Books y, más recientemente, relatos de magia de sangre y estafas breves del Ciclo Ustari .


La película Sunset Boulevard (1950) es quizás el mayor logro de Billy Wilder en cuanto a diálogos, incluyendo la frase más memorable (interpretada por el también gran actor de voz William Holden): «A veces es interesante ver lo malo que puede ser escribir mal» (una frase que cobra mayor fuerza porque el personaje que habla es un escritor bastante malo). Es inevitable preguntarse si Wilder se estaba guiñando el ojo al inventarla, a pesar de que Wilder, un judío polaco que emigró a Estados Unidos a finales de sus veinte, no aprendió inglés hasta que llegó a Hollywood para comenzar su brillante carrera como guionista y director.

El hecho de que el inglés no fuera su lengua materna podría haber ayudado a Wilder a crear diálogos tan grandiosos. Escuchar un idioma hablado cuando no lo entiendes es una experiencia completamente diferente a cuando lo hablas con fluidez; en 1972, el cantante italiano Adriano Celentano lanzó " Prisencolinensinainciusol ", una canción con letras incoherentes diseñada para sonar como inglés hablado con un acento estadounidense típico. Escuchar la canción es una experiencia interesante; al principio, parece que el significado de la canción está más allá de tu comprensión porque los ritmos y las inflexiones son perfectos. La razón por la que esta canción suena bien a pesar de no tener sentido revela el truco fundamental de un buen diálogo: el ritmo.

Esclavo del ritmo

Cualquier escritor sabe que es muy fácil equivocarse al escribir un diálogo:

- Monotonía, donde todos los personajes suenan más o menos exactamente igual (si un lector no puede distinguir quién está hablando sin una etiqueta de diálogo, tienes un problema).

- Conversaciones forzadas y con mucha exposición, llenas de significantes torpes como "Como usted sabe..." o repeticiones de hechos reformulados para mayor claridad (la gente simplemente no habla así).

- Un diálogo demasiado cercano a la realidad, porque en la vida real todos hablamos con frases divagantes y tartamudeantes, usando muchos sonidos de relleno para ganar tiempo; y aunque hacer que tus personajes suenen así puede ser realista, es desagradable de leer (y difícil de entender en la página).

- Personajes que sólo hablan en puntos de la trama, abriendo la boca únicamente cuando el lector necesita saber algo.

El punto óptimo para el diálogo no es uniforme, pero el truco está en igualar el ritmo del habla real, pero utilizando un enfoque mucho más controlado de las palabras reales.

Modelado del habla

La clave es desconectar un poco el cerebro y escuchar solo el ritmo y el patrón de una conversación, sin el significado de los sonidos. Una manera fácil de lograrlo es tomar un diálogo de una fuente ficticia o de una conversación real y luego sustituirlo con tus propias palabras.

CONSEJO: Roba el ritmo, saltea las partes aburridas: esta es una oportunidad perfecta para eliminar las palabras “sustitutivas” que todos usamos para perder el tiempo mientras pensamos, como “um” y “ah” o, si eres italiano, allora .

Tomando prestado de una escena: Supongamos que tienes una escena entre dos personajes hablando de algo. ¿Por qué no copiar el ritmo de uno de los maestros del diálogo cinematográfico moderno, Quentin Tarantino, y su clásico Pulp Fiction ?

JULES : Bueno, cuéntame otra vez sobre las barras de hachís.

VINCENT : Bien, ¿qué quieres saber?

JULES : Bueno, el hachís es legal allí, ¿no?

VINCENT : Sí, es legal, pero no es completamente legal. O sea, no puedes entrar a un restaurante, liarte un porro y empezar a fumar. Quieren que fumes en tu casa o en ciertos lugares designados.

Incluso sin haber visto la película, el ritmo de cada hablante es claro y el diálogo vibra de una forma distintiva y agradable al oído, razón por la cual esta escena es una de las más famosas de una película famosa. El tema no es precisamente importante en ningún sentido (ni para la trama ni para nada), pero se puede apreciar cómo el uso de palabras sin sentido como "ok" , "right" y "yeah" se utilizan para mantener el ritmo equilibrado, y cómo algunas palabras se omiten intencionadamente para conseguir un sonido más natural (como " ain't hundred percent legal" en lugar de "ain't a hundred percent legal "). Modelar tu propio diálogo a partir de estos ritmos puede conseguir ese mismo dinamismo para tus propias palabras.

Vincent Jules Pulp Fiction

También puedes copiar de los grandes libros. ¿Por qué no copiar de un maestro del arte como Hemingway o Elmore Leonard? Leonard tenía la habilidad de hacer que las conversaciones cotidianas resaltaran de la página:

CHRIS : No me echó, me fui. Llamé, no estabas, así que me quedé en casa de Jerry.

PAPÁ : Cuando más me necesitabas. Lamento no haber estado aquí.

CHRIS : En realidad, si vamos directo al grano, Phyllis es quien lleva la voz cantante. Me da información bancaria sobre diferentes tipos de anualidades, fideicomisos, fondos institucionales de activos líquidos... Estoy aquí sentado intentando mantenerme despierto, mientras ella me cuenta sobre el apasionante mundo de los fondos fiduciarios.

PAPÁ : Tenía un presentimiento. Lo has pensado. Te das cuenta de que la vida continúa.

CHRIS : Ni siquiera estoy seguro de qué fue lo que me atrajo de ella en primer lugar.

PAPÁ : ¿Quieres que te lo diga?

Todo el diálogo de Leonard tiene un ritmo reconocible que mágicamente parece realista a la vez que está muy controlado y cuidadosamente construido.

Tomando prestado de la vida real: Un enfoque igualmente eficaz es modelar tu diálogo con base en conversaciones reales. Esto puede ser mejor si intentas capturar un ritmo cultural icónico o si simplemente buscas algo más natural. Este enfoque puede garantizar que tu diálogo tenga un ritmo creíble y auténtico, lo cual representa aproximadamente el 75 % de la batalla.

Una combinación de ambos enfoques consiste en usar la forma distintiva de hablar de un actor para modelar el ritmo de un personaje. Piensa en un actor con una forma distintiva de hablar: Alec Baldwin, Meryl Streep o incluso alguien que no sea actor y que conozcas personalmente. Imaginarlo leyendo cada línea que escribes para un personaje específico te guiará inconscientemente hacia un ritmo distintivo, pero creíble y consistente, para cada línea que diga en tu historia.

Estos enfoques lo entrenarán para escribir diálogos que suenen realistas en todo momento, eventualmente sin tener que basarse en el trabajo de otros o en las conversaciones de los vecinos, y eventualmente para desarrollar su propio ritmo personal que no dependa de nada más que su imaginación creativa y sus habilidades.

El diálogo es difícil, nadie dice lo contrario. Construir mundos y tramar puede ser divertido, lleno de la emoción salvaje de simplemente crear. El diálogo es un asunto delicado. El secreto de un buen diálogo no reside en líneas poéticas escaneadas y reescaneadas sin cesar en busca de comas errantes o repletas de símiles enrevesados; se trata del ritmo. Si los ritmos al hablar de tus personajes parecen naturales, al lector le resultará fácil imaginar que los personajes realmente están hablando, aunque el diálogo escrito sea muy diferente del hablado. Esto es increíblemente importante porque hacer que tus personajes hablen de forma creíble vende incluso la construcción de mundos más inverosímil y los giros argumentales inesperados más desafiantes. Un mal diálogo puede arruinar hasta la historia más inteligente, incluso historias que, por lo demás, están brillantemente escritas, y como muchos aspectos del oficio, acertar con el diálogo tiene más que ver con aproximarse a la realidad que con reproducirla. Al igual que en "Prisencolinensinainciusol", estás engañando a tus lectores para que "escuchen" lo que quieres que escuchen.

Excepto, por supuesto, que se recomienda usar palabras que realmente signifiquen algo. Así que, escritores, díganme: ¿Qué escritor crea el mejor diálogo para modelar su propia obra?


Jeff Somers

Jeff Somers ( www.jeffreysomers.com ) comenzó a escribir por orden judicial para intentar desviar sus impulsos creativos de la ingeniería genética grotesca. Ha publicado nueve novelas, incluyendo la serie Avery Cates de novelas de ciencia ficción negra de Orbit Books ( www.avery-cates.com ) y la serie Ustari Cycle de novelas de fantasía urbana. Su cuento " Ringing the Changes " fue seleccionado para su inclusión en Best American Mystery Stories 2006 , su relato " Sift, Almost Invisible, Through " apareció en la antología Crimes by Moonlight, editada por Charlaine Harris, y su relato " Three Cups of Tea " apareció en la antología Hanzai Japan . También escribe sobre libros para Barnes and Noble y About.com , y sobre el arte de escribir para Writer's Digest , que publicará su libro sobre el arte de escribir, Writing Without Rules, en 2018. Vive en Hoboken con su esposa, la Duquesa, y sus gatos. Considera que los pantalones siempre son opcionales.

diciembre 10, 2025 6 lectura mínima

Singer-songwriter Abner James finds his creativity in the quiet freedom of analog tools. Learn how his creative process transcends different media.

Abner James went to school for film directing. But the success of the band he and his brother formed together, Eighty Ninety, knocked him onto a different trajectory.

The band has accrued more than 40 million streams since the release of their debut EP “Elizabeth," and their work was even co-signed by Taylor Swift when the singer added Eighty Ninety to her playlist "Songs Taylor Loves.”

Now, Abner is returning to long-form writing in addition to songwriting, and with a change in media comes an examination of the creative process. We sat down to chat about what's the same — and what's different. 

ANNIE COSBY: Tell us about your songwriting process.

ABNER JAMES: The way I tend to write my songs is hunched over a guitar and just seeing what comes. Sounds become words become shapes. It's a very physical process that is really about turning my brain off.

And one of the things that occurred to me when I was traveling, actually, was that I would love to be able to do that but from a writing perspective. What would happen if I sat down and approached writing in the same way that I approached music? In a more intuitive and free-form kind of way? What would that dig up?

AC: That's basically the ethos of Freewrite.

AJ: Yes. We had just put out a record, and I was thinking about how to get into writing for the next one. It occurred to me that regardless of how I started, I always finished on a screen. And I wondered: what's the acoustic guitar version of writing?

Where there's not blue light hitting me in the face. Even if I'm using my Notes app, it's the same thing. It really gets me into a different mindset.

 "I wondered: what's the acoustic guitar version of writing?"

I grew up playing piano. That was my first instrument. And I found an old typewriter at a thrift store, and I love it. It actually reminded me a lot of playing piano, the kind of physical, the feeling of it. And it was really fun, but pretty impractical, especially because I travel a fair amount.

And so I wondered, is there such a thing as a digital typewriter? And I googled it, and I found Freewrite.

AC: What about Freewrite helps you write?

AJ:I think, pragmatically, just the E Ink screen is a huge deal, because it doesn't exhaust me in the same way. And the idea of having a tool specifically set aside for the process is appealing in an aesthetic way but also a mental-emotional way. When it comes out, it's kind of like ... It's like having an office you work out of. It's just for that.

"The way I tend to write my songs is hunched over a guitar and just seeing what comes. Sounds become words become shapes. It's a very physical process that is really about turning my brain off."

And all of the pragmatic limitations — like you're not getting texts on it, and you're not doing all that stuff on the internet — that's really helpful, too. But just having the mindset....

When I pick up a guitar, or I sit down at the piano, it very much puts me into that space. Having a tool just for words does the same thing. I find that to be really cool and inspiring.

"When I pick up a guitar, or I sit down at the piano, it very much puts me into that space. Having a tool just for words does the same thing."

AC: So mentally it gets you ready for writing.

AJ: Yeah, and also, when you write a Microsoft Word, it looks so finished that it's hard to keep going. If every time I strummed a chord, I was hearing it back, mixed and mastered and produced...?

It's hard to stay in that space when I'm seeing it fully written out and formatted in, like, Times New Roman, looking all seriously back at me.

AC: I get that. I have terrible instincts to edit stuff over and over again and never finish a story.

AJ:  Also, the way you just open it and it's ready to go. So you don't have the stages of the computer turning on, that kind of puts this pressure, this tension on.

It's working at the edges in all these different ways that on their own could feel a little bit like it's not really necessary. All these amorphous things where you could look at it and be like, well, I don't really need any of those. But they add up to a critical mass that actually is significant.

And sometimes, if I want to bring it on a plane, I've found it's replaced reading for me. Rather than pick up a book or bring a book on the plane, I bring Traveler and just kind of hang out in that space and see if anything comes up.

I've found that it's kind of like writing songs on a different instrument, you get different styles of music that you wouldn't have otherwise. I've found that writing from words towards music, I get different kinds of songs than I have in the past, which has been interesting.

In that way, like sitting at a piano, you just write differently than you do on a guitar, or even a bass, because of the things those instruments tend to encourage or that they can do.

It feels almost like a little synthesizer, a different kind of instrument that has unlocked a different kind of approach for me.

"I've found that it's kind of like writing songs on a different instrument, you get different styles of music that you wouldn't have otherwise... [Traveler] feels almost like a little synthesizer, a different kind of instrument that has unlocked a different kind of approach for me."

AC: As someone who doesn't know the first thing about writing music, that's fascinating. It's all magic to me.

AJ: Yeah.

AC: What else are you interested in writing?

AJ: I went to school for film directing. That was kind of what I thought I was going to do. And then my brother and I started the band and that kind of happened first and knocked me onto a different track for a little while after college.

Growing up, though, writing was my way into everything. In directing, I wanted to be in control of the thing that I wrote. And in music, it was the same — the songwriting really feels like it came from that same place. And then the idea of writing longer form, like fiction, almost feels just like the next step from song to EP to album to novel.

For whatever reason, that started feeling like a challenge that would be deeply related to the kinds of work that we do in the studio.

AC: Do you have any advice for aspiring songwriters?

AJ: This sounds like a cliche, but it's totally true: whatever success that I've had as a songwriter — judge that for yourself — but whatever success I have had, has been directly proportional to just writing the song that I wanted to hear.

What I mean by that is, even if you're being coldly, cynically, late-stage capitalist about it, it's by far the most success I've had. The good news is that you don't have to choose. And in fact, when you start making those little compromises, or even begin to inch in that direction, it just doesn't work. So you can forget about it.

Just make music you want to hear. And that will be the music that resonates with most people.

I think there's a temptation to have an imaginary focus group in your head of like 500 people. But the problem is all those people are fake. They're not real. None of those people are actually real people. You're a focus group of one, you're one real person. There are more real people in that focus group than in the imaginary one.

And I just don't think that we're that different, in the end. So that would be my advice.

AC: That seems like generally great creative advice. Because fiction writers talk about that too, right? Do you write to market or do you write the book you want to read. Same thing. And that imaginary focus group has been debilitating for me. I have to silence that focus group before I can write.

AJ: Absolutely.

"I think there's a temptation to have an imaginary focus group in your head of like 500 people. But the problem is all those people are fake... You're a focus group of one, you're one real person. There are more real people in that focus group than in the imaginary one."

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Learn more about Abner James, his brother, and their band, Eighty Ninety, on Instagram.

noviembre 29, 2025 4 lectura mínima

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noviembre 25, 2025 1 lectura mínima

This is a great gratitude writing exercise to be done alone or in a group, with people of any age.

How to Play

    1. Designate someone to read out each prompt below. (Feel free to add your own prompts.)
    2. After each prompt is read, set a timer for one minute. (With younger kids, this can be shortened. For older folks who want to freewrite meaningfully, more time can be added.)
    3. Each person freewrites by finishing the sentence and elaborating until the timer goes off. (For little kids, this can be done verbally with an adult recording their answers. Hilarity will ensue.)
    4. Remeber that freewriting — allowing yourself to write with abandon — enables you to let go, tapping into your subconscious to explore your thoughts more deeply.
    5. When everyone is done with all the prompts, take turns going through some your answers. Some people may be eager to share. Others may not want to. Respect their decision.

The Prompts

  • I'm grateful for... [After you've finished this prompt, repeat it five times. Challenge yourself and others not to repeat a singe word with each new answer.]
  • The silliest thing I'm grateful for is...
  • The littlest thing I'm grateful for is...
  • The biggest thing I'm grateful for is...
  • The grossest thing I'm grateful for is...
  • One thing I love about myself is...
  • My favorite thing that happened this year was...
  • My hope for next year is...

This writing exercise has resulted in some sweet answers — and many hilarious ones, too. If you try it out, do let us know.

Write on.